Really enjoyed the read. The tension you created, and the rhythm of your writing really kept me engaged. I also love how you were able to make this story into a personal reflection. Especially loved the line "Only the pink script remained, etched sharper than the memory of his face." Thank you! Subscribed!
I was holding my breath along with her. 🫢
A sign doesn’t need to be an anomaly to be valid. Even if she didn’t will the driver your way, your mom was still there keeping you steady. 👼
Thanks so much for the kind comment.
Really enjoyed the read. The tension you created, and the rhythm of your writing really kept me engaged. I also love how you were able to make this story into a personal reflection. Especially loved the line "Only the pink script remained, etched sharper than the memory of his face." Thank you! Subscribed!
Thanks so much, Byron.
Beautiful, touching and poignant story.
thank you, sir.